Student work: a thing that touched me

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(Summary description)WhenIgottothepark,Isteppedontheskateboardandslidandslid.Suddenly,theskateboardlostcontrol.Withabang,Ifellfourfeettotheground.Aftermykneescameintoclosecontactwiththeearth,Iwasbleeding.IwassoscaredthatIcried.Motherheardthecryandrushedover,heldmeinmyarms,carefullywrappedmywounds,andkeptlickingme.Suddenly,awarmstreamflowedinmyheart.WhenIwenttoschoolthenextday,whenItookthestairs,Icouldn’tmakeanyeffortonmyrightfoot.Atthistime,mygoodfriendChenHailongsawitandtookmestepbysteptotheclassroom.WhenIfirstenteredtheclassroom,thestudentssawmy"woundedperson"andcameovertohelpmeintheseatandaskedaboutmyleginjury.Ionceagainfeltthedeepfeelingsofmyclassmates.HuJiataoAtnoon,Mr.Honghelpedmetohotmealsandputthemonmydesk,andsaidkindly:"Eat,eatsomegoodlegs!"Aftertheteacherbentdown,gentlyliftedmylegonthechair,sothatmylegscouldbeputcomfortable.Lookingattheteacher'sconcern,myheartwasmovedagain.Intheevening,myfatherdrovemetoFuzhouSecondHospitaltoseethelowerleginjury.Aweeklater,mywoundwasgood,andalthoughIcouldseeadeepscar,myheartwasverywarm.Thankstothisscar,Icandeeplyappreciatethetoucharoundme.Thisincidentreallytouchedme!Itmademeunderstand-loveisaroundus.Itistheloveofthestudents,theloveoftheteacher,theloveofthemotherandfather! (Instructor:ZhouQin)

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Student work: a thing that touched me

(Summary description)WhenIgottothepark,Isteppedontheskateboardandslidandslid.Suddenly,theskateboardlostcontrol.Withabang,Ifellfourfeettotheground.Aftermykneescameintoclosecontactwiththeearth,Iwasbleeding.IwassoscaredthatIcried.Motherheardthecryandrushedover,heldmeinmyarms,carefullywrappedmywounds,andkeptlickingme.Suddenly,awarmstreamflowedinmyheart.WhenIwenttoschoolthenextday,whenItookthestairs,Icouldn’tmakeanyeffortonmyrightfoot.Atthistime,mygoodfriendChenHailongsawitandtookmestepbysteptotheclassroom.WhenIfirstenteredtheclassroom,thestudentssawmy"woundedperson"andcameovertohelpmeintheseatandaskedaboutmyleginjury.Ionceagainfeltthedeepfeelingsofmyclassmates.HuJiataoAtnoon,Mr.Honghelpedmetohotmealsandputthemonmydesk,andsaidkindly:"Eat,eatsomegoodlegs!"Aftertheteacherbentdown,gentlyliftedmylegonthechair,sothatmylegscouldbeputcomfortable.Lookingattheteacher'sconcern,myheartwasmovedagain.Intheevening,myfatherdrovemetoFuzhouSecondHospitaltoseethelowerleginjury.Aweeklater,mywoundwasgood,andalthoughIcouldseeadeepscar,myheartwasverywarm.Thankstothisscar,Icandeeplyappreciatethetoucharoundme.Thisincidentreallytouchedme!Itmademeunderstand-loveisaroundus.Itistheloveofthestudents,theloveoftheteacher,theloveofthemotherandfather! (Instructor:ZhouQin)

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学生佳作：一件令我感动的事

When I got to the park, I stepped on the skateboard and slid and slid. Suddenly, the skateboard lost control. With a bang, I fell four feet to the ground. After my knees came into close contact with the earth, I was bleeding. I was so scared that I cried. Mother heard the cry and rushed over, held me in my arms, carefully wrapped my wounds, and kept licking me. Suddenly, a warm stream flowed in my heart.

When I went to school the next day, when I took the stairs, I couldn’t make any effort on my right foot. At this time, my good friend Chen Hailong saw it and took me step by step to the classroom. When I first entered the classroom, the students saw my "wounded person" and came over to help me in the seat and asked about my leg injury. I once again felt the deep feelings of my classmates.

学生佳作：一件令我感动的事

Hu Jiatao

At noon, Mr. Hong helped me to hot meals and put them on my desk, and said kindly: "Eat, eat some good legs!" After the teacher bent down, gently lifted my leg on the chair, so that my legs could be put comfortable. Looking at the teacher's concern, my heart was moved again.

In the evening, my father drove me to Fuzhou Second Hospital to see the lower leg injury. A week later, my wound was good, and although I could see a deep scar, my heart was very warm. Thanks to this scar, I can deeply appreciate the touch around me.

This incident really touched me! It made me understand - love is around us. It is the love of the students, the love of the teacher, the love of the mother and father!

(Instructor: Zhou Qin)

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